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In the evening, my mum and I went to a haunted house. I went in, then I found a chest. It was very beautiful, and I thought there was full of gold. I opened it , but there was a ghost sleeping in it. “Sorry, can you tell me where is the exit?” I asked him, the ghost seemed to be thinking for a few minutes, then he said:“ If I haven’t remember it wrong, it is that way.” He pointed a door. “Thanks.” I said: “You are welcome, but I am very boring now, can you talk to me?” he asked sadly.“ OK, as your wish.” So I talked with him some minutes, then I said “bye-bye” to him and “good night.” When I came out I was very happy to see my mom waiting for me. It was so happy and sweet.名师点评:At first ,my dear author, you had to set aside a space between two words!And then ,I want to ask you what it''s meaning " thinkingforafew"?Is it a mistake spell?Finally ,I wish you will be write well more and more! Come on !~o(∩_∩)o...(学乐中国特聘教师:周晓慧老师)2008-9-4 18:43:00