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Hello,everyone,I′m No ,My English name is Miranda. I′m a lovely girl.My hobby is drawing and singing.Now, I′d like to sing a song for you.《XXXXXXX》.Today, I′ll tell you something about the places of interests in China The Great wall and west lake.The Great wall of china,also know in the world is an ancient Chinese fortigication built from the end of 14th century until the beginning of the 17th century.during the Ming Dynasty.in order to protect China frome raids by other tribes.Nowerdays.it is very popular with all over the world.It is saying that he does not reacg the Great wall is not a real man.So all the people from the world want to climb the areat wall.Do you want to have a try?I was born in Hang Zhou.The west lake is very famous.it′s also very beantiful too.In every summer there are a lots of lotous blooming in the lake Every evening.there are many colowful light shining on the lake.looks like a shining world.There are still a lot boats.seems so wonderful!And the water is so clear that we can see the fish are swimming in it.What are beautiful lake!Do you like yt?名师点评：优点：英语水平较好，文章中没有明显的语法错误，语句通顺，流畅。改进之处：文章每个单词时间尽量要有空格，这样方便修改和阅读，也是学习英语写作的一个好习惯。（学乐中国特聘教师：赵晓辉老师）2010-4-21 13:58:00